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Chapter 1, The hardship of life
- written 27th Feb 2008 by Chrischie
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The problem of the old woman.
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In the train of people was also a woman. She wasn't tall and she looked very old.
The sun was burning on her hat and she was really thirsty. There were a lot of people in the caravan but the old woman looked most strength less. She was one of the last people in the train and it seems that she got slower and slower.
On her back was a very big baggage which she can't carry a long time anymore. Her face was wet from sweeting and grimace by pain. Her feet were hurt by the stones on the street because she had no shoes. After a while her steps were getting slower and doubt fuller. At the end she needed to sit down and because of that she lost the connection to the rest of the caravan and no one noticed that she was missing........
(Lisa Blümel, Christian Rimbach)
The sun was burning on her hat and she was really thirsty. There were a lot of people in the caravan but the old woman looked most strength less. She was one of the last people in the train and it seems that she got slower and slower.
On her back was a very big baggage which she can't carry a long time anymore. Her face was wet from sweeting and grimace by pain. Her feet were hurt by the stones on the street because she had no shoes. After a while her steps were getting slower and doubt fuller. At the end she needed to sit down and because of that she lost the connection to the rest of the caravan and no one noticed that she was missing........
(Lisa Blümel, Christian Rimbach)
Tags : thrillerold woman